In my righting in the last two weeks I made a powtoon about Edmund Hillary so if you want to check it out here's the link
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Tuesday, August 25, 2020
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Hi Joel,
ReplyDeleteYou worked really hard on this Powtoon, I can tell. I like that you chose backgrounds that fit with Edmund Hillary's love of the mountains. I wonder if you could add a picture so that the reader gets an idea of what it might be about before they click into it?